Musical Surroundings Phonomena Can You Please Fix My Little Story? Thanx:)?

Can you please fix my little story? thanx:)? - musical surroundings phonomena

Clear disappointment

I had no idea what I would do. I thought I would be delighted to go the mall after school. I felt the stillness of the dark room, I felt around me and hear my own breath. I felt like my heart, signs of ear and flashes with each blow. I noticed that at any time and in this Agreement. My eyes were closed in every flash of light and ... Tick, tick tock ... the clock was rusty, man. I saw hatred, confidence and determination in his eyes. I closed my eyes in silence and darkness to devour me. Then everything fell into place automatically, grabbed my bag and I know it's something worth Merlin.
The door of the room was the girl with the name I've never heard fully. I remember Kim writes his name with a dry edge glass on the concrete floor. Four years and still think it was yesterday. The memories will certainly never forget. Julia broke my thoughts and now I was in this. Her hair was done differently today. In general, it takes a ponytail and tie it around your hair. Now she's got elk and straightened its fringes.
"What is done with your hair?" You know what, I look really bad, no offense or anything. "
"Oh, yes, do you think?" Well, that's what today here this evening to listen to music, and might, you know, look different than other days.
"Listening to music? Never heard of it."